Please read my message below the 2 screenshots.
Dear Prudential PR Representative,
First of all, please allow me to make it clear that my family and I have been using some Prudential’s products in the last few years decades and we have been happy with Prudential’s service quality so far.
I also appreciate your recent efforts to reach me and other bloggers on Yahoo! 360 platform.
However, I wonder if you would have more luck with me with some other approaches?
Some reasons why your approach is not very effective:
- Mass communication is not the way to go. Basically it’s like a job applicant who write one cover letter to multiple prospective employers without changing a single word.
- Some bloggers including me don’t expect comments just for the sake of words on the page.
- It looks like you’re just there to “take” what you can.
- It looks like you’re going after quantity rather than quality opportunities.
If you segment me a professional working in the foreign sector which I am, kindly arrange a business appointment after business hours.
If you segment me a blogger which I am, please accept my suggestion to read Darren Rowse’s 21 tips on PR campaigns on blogs.
I’m looking forward to another opportunity of collaboration.